Hi Rania, I can see how much you love your dad by just reading a sentence. I like the way how you really showed the viewers how much you loved your dad. But there is 1 thing, you forgot some punctuation and forgot the capitals. What do you think was the best thing your dad did for you?
Hi Rania it's Payton & Tahlya from Kawakawa primary in room2 we like your slide about your dad maybe we should do one of our own dads.Maybe next time you should put a cool photo of you and your dad just so it shows more detail.If you would like to see our learning our blogs are http://kpspaytonm.blogspot.co.nz/ and http://kpstahlyah.blogspot.co.nz/ see you next time.
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ReplyDeleteHi Rania, I can see how much you love your dad by just reading a sentence. I like the way how you really showed the viewers how much you loved your dad. But there is 1 thing, you forgot some punctuation and forgot the capitals. What do you think was the best thing your dad did for you?
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Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Rania it's Payton & Tahlya from Kawakawa primary in room2 we like your slide about your dad maybe we should do one of our own dads.Maybe next time you should put a cool photo of you and your dad just so it shows more detail.If you would like to see our learning our blogs are http://kpspaytonm.blogspot.co.nz/ and http://kpstahlyah.blogspot.co.nz/ see you next time.
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